I love it. Very nice job, even if you don't think so. The hands are indeed crappy, but the rest is good. And for Edward's Sake, stop beating yourself up over it. You'll get better.

Love,
Hentai-sama

It's not "lame," I like it, and her hands look fine (you should see the way I draw mine, most of the time, I just cut the hands off).

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Pour monter une vague sur l'inhalation de votre
Cause je t'aime pas?
Ne peut pas ne pas vous aimer, non ... "
------ Frou Frou

so cute.

i liek the colours you used.

Hm.... (you know something bad is coming, Chris. Haha...)
Well, this would be REALLY good if not for a few things.
A. It was done like we do our Chapter Booklets, and the idea wasn't your own (at least you credited it)
B. Her proportioning is a little skewed (i.e. Her head is much bigger than the rest of her and her chest and stomach are way smaller than her lower half)
C. The eyes are a little to far apart. Eyes are supposed to be one "eye-length" away from eachother.
D. The arms are good, except the left one needs SHPAPE. As a good friend told me once on gaia (and no, you don't know her) "They look a little like tubes attached to the body." ^^ And the hand needs a little help.
w00t. Don't you love my advanced critique? I just get like this sometimes, friendy.

Well, Guess. Thanks ever so much for the advice (as harsh as it was..) I certaintly felt the love. I'm glad you thought it would have been good except for those..-goes back and counts-..4 reasons.
And thanks Wren, Skid and Mar. I'm glad you liked it! n.n

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Hyde pwn's all. Recognize fuu!

Hey, I've seen the original picture of this, it is cool.

I like the lightness of it, looks almost like you used watercolor. :3

The only thing taht needs improvement is the face,pay attention the way you draw the down face lines

The draw is a great work,keep the way and send more!!
PS:your hands are great

Awh thank you Kage, actually I used the colored pencils Amy gave me for me b-day.
And thanks AprendizDesenhista, I'm glad you like the hands even though I don't. And I'll watch the face lines. Thanks for all the great advice everyone! (espically Guess..)

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Hyde pwn's all. Recognize fuu!

So cute!!!^^ Gatta fav!

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Believe the Lies.
Nobody wins,
Everyone dies.
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